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This is my poem
My cup
My pitcher
My ocean
To pour my soul onto paper
To corrupt a white landscape
With this black expression
That does nothing for humanity

Letters formed to words
To sentences
To stanzas
To paragraphs
To pages
To books
Until words dance before my eyes when I wake
And ideas brush against my mind when I sleep.
This is my life
My journal
My escape
The only thing that will absorb me
The thing that will transform my twisted emotions
Into an edifice resembling beauty to be noticed or not
A redemption for my thoughts
A clear way to wash away the tar of boding.

Perhaps a gift
Or a cleansing
A converging of mind to paper
But whatever the case
I will always view this poem as...

Nature.
Nature to express oneself.
To be understood.

This is communication.
Internal communication to all of humanity
In hopes of finally being understood
Of finally finding someone like ourselves.
This is what sets us apart from everyone else

The ability to create everything...
From nothing.
©2008 *ShadoCrytr
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~lunagirl95:iconlunagirl95: May 11, 2008, 3:08:00 PM
Deep, nice, you have a way with words.

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If I can stop one Heart from breaking
I will not live in vain
If I can ease one Life the Aching
Or cool one Pain

Or help one fainting Robin
Unto his Nest again
I shall not live in vain

~Emily Dickinson
=whydoidothiseveryday:iconwhydoidothiseveryday: May 12, 2008, 1:57:51 AM
yeah, i agree, i'm not too keen on some peoples poems about poetry but this one stood out, well done.
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~xSwEetxBlAsPheMyx:iconxSwEetxBlAsPheMyx: May 12, 2008, 5:59:06 AM
i like it, the use of the landscape metaphor and the way you seem to yo-yo between feeling writing is worthless and priceless, something i often do myself
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I am just a good
for nothing - companion
of moon and flower

- Bill Wyatt
*ShadoCrytr:iconShadoCrytr: May 12, 2008, 12:26:41 PM
Yeah, I was trying to pull something like that off. I'm glad you liked it.

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~LMNt:iconLMNt: May 17, 2008, 5:42:11 PM
Interesting philosophy on poetry. I love how you mixed the ideas of prioritizing yourself and thus bettering the world by sharing what you view as a vital enrichment of humanity. I love the last line, and view poetry in a new light because of it. Thank you for posting this poem.

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*ShadoCrytr:iconShadoCrytr: May 17, 2008, 6:04:44 PM
Ah, you're very welcome. I'm surprised, but very pleased that this enlightened you. I didn't realize that I mixed so many things together... but I'm glad I succeeded in you clicking the favorite button. Thank you.

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